Thanks for the replies, they certainly help. The idea for this piece stemmed from an experience I had with EMS last month (if you've never had an anaphylactic reaction, take my word for it, it's not fun.) It's a shorter story (less than 2,000 words,) but the storyline revolves around a rookie EMT and her smart-a$$ partner. The only requirement that the prof wanted is for the main character to undergo an internal/emotional change from beginning to end. The call is on an elderly woman and the rookie EMT realizes that she isn't cut out for the job. I know, I know, kind of cheesy/cliche, but I at least wanted it to be accurate. If anyone has any better ideas for plot or character change, it's not due for a while, so I'm all ears. Once again, thank you!
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